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CaptainN
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Joined: Jul 15, 2001
Posted: Dec 31, 2001 4:03 PM

Since its New Years Eve I figured I 'd hunt for the old Smileybusters file that was made exactly one year ago today. I was lucky enough to find it. Also if you would like to read the original version with the pictures head here: http://ghostbusterjason.tripod.com/SB1.htm. The following is Smileybusters:

It's NYE Today. We better hurry.
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The SmileyBusters drive to the GBCentral.com
Headquarters to see the problem.

Bo: "looks like a giant... evil Smiley
face".
Grime: "So just what exactly is the problem,
and why are there hundreds, possibly thousands of people in front of it?"
HackSaw pulls out a device similar to Egon's
PKE Meter/Gigameter and examines the giant
Smiley face that covers the building.
HackSaw: "It's a defensive shield.
SmileyKing put it up. It's the only way
into the HQ. He doesn't want anyone else
in there."
HackSaw points to the Smiley face once again.
HackSaw: "it's pulsing with evil energy
and negative Human Emotions. Anyone who
tries to step through it is Barbecue."
Proton Charger stares at the Smiley face.
An idea suddenly comes to mind.
Proton Charger: "Guys, what if we try
using our Proton beams on the shield?
The evil Smiley energy may decrease."
pkNRG: "It doesn't hurt to try."
HackSaw isn't so sure about the idea.
They can't waste valuable time. It'll
be Midnight soon and by that time
SmileyKing will dominate the World.
HackSaw: "alright then. We have a decent
amount of time to do so. Let's get it on!"
The five SBs grab their Proton Packs
and go straight to the Smiley shield.
Bo: "Pull 'em."
The guys grab their Proton Guns and charge
them up.
Bo: "Let's Cook!"

The guys fire their Proton Guns. The beams
seem to have no affect on the shield.
The entire town cries out in disappointment
and loudly yells "Booooooo!!!"
The guys return to the Ecto-1, all silent
and disappointed. HackSaw suddenly speaks.
HackSaw: "That shield is pulsing with evil.
It would take a TREMENDOUS amount of positively-charged energy to destroy it and
enter the building. And I seriously
doubt that there's enough of the energy in
this town to do it."
Grime steps up, looking angry and really
disappointed.
Grime: "Aw C'mon! The reason for that is
simple. Everyone's so pissed at the carnage
that idiot SmileyKing caused. I mean, at
Heart their flowing with positive energy.
But their not willing to open it. We have
to think of something that everyone
here enjoys."
pkNRG: "He's right. We need to think of
something that everyone in this town
loves and enjoys."
Proton Charger: "Something good."
Bo: "Something decent."
Grime: "something pure."
An idea suddenly pops up in all of their
heads.
To Be Continued....



Bo: "So Hack, what exactly do you plan to do with the 100-FT Stay Puft statue?"
HackSaw: "You'll see. You'll see."
HackSaw, Grime, Bo & pkNRG are inside
the 100-FT Stay Puft statue. Grime & pk
are armed with Slime Blowers, HackSaw
& Bo Proton Packs. As for Proton Charger, he's outside the GBCentral.com HQ.
He's armed with a Proton Pack.
PC contacts HackSaw with his walkie-talkie.
Proton Charger: "HackSaw, so when am I
gonna take down the shield?"
HackSaw: "I'll call you."
Proton Charger: "OK Then!"
Bo & Grime are busy setting up speakers
and electronic equipment inside Stay Puft.
pkNRG is adjusting his Slime Blower.
HackSaw is up top Stay Puft setting up
a Sky Cabin for the SBs. The Sky Cabin
functions like a Command Center.
Bo tests the microphone.
Bo: "1 2 Testing hey this is Bo Holbrook
and I'm ready to kick some Smiley."
Grime & pkNRG have their Slime Blowers
prime and set. They raise them.
pkNRG: "Let's Frost!"
Grime: "It's Slime Time!"
The two SBs slap the Slime Blowers against
each other, and start sliming the inside
of Stay Puft.

The SBs are up in the Sky Cabin atop Stay Puft's head.HackSaw pulls out a Nintendo Controller. It's connected to some electrical generator.
HackSaw: "It's almost Midnight let's get
on with it."
Bo pulls out a Radio and pushes the Play
Button. The song Higher And Higher is
playing, and is making the Mood Slime
active. Suddenly, Stay Puft starts moving!
To Be Continued....




Bo: "Whoa!"
Stay Puft is off his base. HackSaw is controlling him.
Grime: "Uh HackSaw, we're rather high, don't you think?"
pkNRG: "Yeah, but the view of the city is great!"
HackSaw: "Don't bother me. We gotta get
there fast".
It's coming close to Midnight. Stay Puft
is in the Heart of the city. Everyone cheers
on.

pkNRG: "Grime, great plan! You were right!"
Grime: "Yeah, I guess I was."
pkNRG: "Hey HackSaw can't ya go any faster?!"
HackSaw: "No. The vibration will break
him to pieces and slow his speed."
Grime: "We should've padded his feet."
Bo: " I don't think they make Nikes
his size Grime."
pkNRG: "Don't worry he's tough. He's a
Smiley as...
Suddenly, Stay Puft's foot accidently
crushes a Police Car.
HackSaw: "Sorry! My Fault!"

Brian The Cop: "Stay back people. You don't
wanna end up like that poor Police Cruiser,
do ya?"
Stay Puft gets to the GBCentral.com HQ!
The heat is on!
To Be Continued....
Stay Tuned for the stunning Finale!!!




As the SB's come up to the Smiley sheild, where Proton Charger is waiting, CaptainN arrives with his pack. As the countdown comes close zero. CaptainN heat's up his pack, and fires.

To Be Continued...


Stay Puft goes right next to the building.
There's a glass opening on the rooftop.
Bo fires a Proton beam at the glass.
It breaks. The 4 SBs pull out
grappling hook guns and fire into
the open hole. They grab onto the
ropes and slide down.
They run into three nasty Smiley guards.
Bo: "Happy New Year!"
Smiley Guard #1: "Pitiful Mortals! How did
you enter our base?!"
Smiley Guard #2: "You have violated
SmileyKing's commands!!! You MUST
SUFFER!!!!"
HackSaw turns to his three fellow SmileyBusters.
HackSaw: "Oh did you little buggers pick
the wrong guys to mess with, will you blast
'em and hose 'em please?"
pkNRG: "No Problem!"
pkNRG slimes Guard #1

Bo blasts the 2nd Guard.

HackSaw traps the 3rd Guard.

Grime notices a very strange sight.
He spots dozens of people in a Trance-Like
state behind a glowing green Barrier.
Grime: "Guys! Look at this crap!"
Bo: "Damn man. That's disturbing."
Grime: "There the GBCentral.com Board
Members. Their trapped!"
pkNRG: "We gotta get 'em out!"
HackSaw: "We only have 8 more minutes
before Midnight. We gotta hurry. pkNRG
& Grime, slime that Barrier."
Just as pkNRG & Grime raise their Slime
Blowers, SmileyKing appears into the room.

HackSaw: "Uh-Oh."
pkNRG: "Hold it right there Nimrod!"
You wanna rule the World?! Go head
and knock out some Smilies, otherwise
I'm going to give you three to get your
ugly yellow butt outta our World. ONE!"
Bo: "Two."
pkNRG: "THREE!!"
Bo & HackSaw fire their Proton beams
at SmileyKing. They both hit him.
pkNRG: "You Got Him! You Got Him!"
In a very angry mood, SmileyKing hurls
the Proton beams at the four SBs and
sends them flying to the ground on their
backs. Their all paralyzed.
Grime: "That was a really STUPID plan!"
HackSaw: "Anybody OK?"
Grime: "NO!"
HackSaw: "Bo, how are you?"
Bo: "I'm fine."
HackSaw: "What about you pk?"
pkNRG: "I've been better, but AGH!! I'm alright."
HackSaw: "I'm not."
SmileyKing heads up to the Barrier.
SmileyKing: "You are all my Children now.
Only five more minutes till we rule
the World. First, I must destroy those pitiful Half-Men who tried to defeat me.
How dare they try to prevent the Season
Of Evil!!"
Bo: "Hey SmileyJERK! Yeah you, you know,
I have met some really stupid people in my
life, but you take the Pizza pal."
Grime: "Only a SMILEYKING, would come
into our World and use this place as a
base.
HackSaw: "Nice choice. BONEHEAD!!!"
pkNRG: "If you were normal like all of
us, you would be livin' the sweet life,
out in Southern California's, BEAUTIFUL,
San Fernando Valley!"
Angry at the remarks, SmileyKing pulls
out a glowing blue energy ball and throws
it at the SBs. Suddenly it changes into
a wave and hits all four SBs, badly hurting
them.
Grime: "OW!"
HackSaw: "UGHHHHHHHH!!!!!"
Bo: "Oh dammit! Oh DAMMIT!"

Will the SmileyBusters save the World in time? Stick around for Part 2 of this explosive finale!



The guys are badly hurt. SmileyKing steps
up to the Barrier.
SmileyKing: "it's almost time."
SmileyKing looks up at the open hole on
the ceiling. He hears cheerful singing.
He growls in pain.
SmileyKing: "UGHH!!!!!!!!!!!"
Grime: "Where's that singin' comin' from?"
pkNRG: "People Outside!"
Outside the HQ, the Smiley shield starts
to change colors. It changes to a bright
glowing pink. The people cheerfully sing.
Proton Charger & CaptainN grab their Proton
Guns and get ready to fire.
Proton Charger: "We're here with you guys!".

CaptainN: "C'Mon. Let's kick some Smiley."
Meanwhile, in the HQ, SmileyKing roars
and growls in pain. The Barrier starts
to weaken. The imprisoned board members
start awakening. The SmileyBusters regain
their strentgh.
HackSaw: "He's weakening! The singing is
neautralizing his energy!"
Grime: "I can move!!"
SmileyKing then disappears into thin air.
The Barrier is gone too. The board members
wake up startled.
Spengs: "What the Heck is going on here?"
HackSaw: "No time to explain.
SmileyKing must be destroyed!"
Suddenly, in the corner center of the room,
SmileyKing appears. Back of him, a river
of millions and millions of evil Smilies.
HackSaw: "He's over there!!!"
SmileyKing changes into some sort of gross,
slimy creature.

HackSaw: "He's transformed!"
Bo: "Smiley, Smiley, Smiley! You've
been a bad Monkey!"
HackSaw: "We can't waste anymore time!
Only one more minute till the New Year!
HURRY!!!"
Bo: "NOW!"
pkNRG & Grime slime the creature. Soon,
SmileyKing reveals his true form: a
giant head!

Bo & HackSaw blast the giant head with
their Proton streams and pkNRG & Grime keep
sliming him with the Slime Blower.
Soon, SmileyKing flies into the background
with his Smiley army and explodes.

Outside, the Smiley shield breaks up and
flies into the air and disappears.
The people alongside Proton Charger
& CaptainN rush in and praise them both.
CaptainN: "We Did It! We Did It!"
Proton Charger: "We're SmileyBusters!!!"
Chad, the creator and owner of the
GBCentral.com HQ, comes up and praises
the four SmileyBusters
Chad: "WOW! That was absolutely incredible!
You guys rock!"
Bo: "Hey! We just wanted to save the
World!"
Chad looks up at the ceiling and notices
the open hole.
Chad: "What's up with that hole?"
HackSaw: "We'll explain later. Sorry
for any damage we caused."
Chad: "That's OK. You guys saved us from
becoming evil Smilies and you saved the
World!"
Spengs: "Yeah. You guys were really brave."
pkNRG goes back to the area where they defeated SmileyKing. He notices a
startling sight.
pkNRG: "Hey guys! Take a look at this!"
Grime: "WOW!"
HackSaw: "How did that get there?"
Bo: "Who cares? It's dedicated to us."
The area where SmileyKing was defeated
is covered up by a big painting with
four SmileyBusters, two with Slime Blowers,
the other two with Proton Packs.
The four SmileyBusters step outside,
where they are priased by the entire city.
Bo, HackSaw, Grime, pkNRG, Proton
Charger, & CaptainN stand in front of
the HQ.
Bo: "We're the best, we're the
beautiful, we're the only...
SmileyBusters!!!

The End!!!
SmileyBusters 2, Coming Soon!




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JESUSFREAK
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Posted: Jan 01, 2002 9:27 PM

LOL!

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bigpapi428
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Joined: Jul 18, 2001
Posted: Jan 02, 2002 7:57 PM

rotflmao
for those who don't know what this stands for like i once did:
Rollin On The Floor Laughin My Ass Off

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SpiffSupreme
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Joined: Nov 25, 2001
Posted: Jan 03, 2002 12:15 AM

Went to the page and couldn't see some of the pics (you know, where there's just this little red X in its place).

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CaptainN
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Joined: Jul 15, 2001
Posted: Jan 03, 2002 6:03 PM

Spiff,

I'm diligently tracking down the missign files at this very moment, although I have the strange feeling that they are lost forever.

CaptainN

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JESUSFREAK
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Posted: Feb 18, 2002 6:24 PM

Nothing is lost! By special order of Chad I am posting this: http://web.archive.org/web/20010617213532/www.ghostbusters.net/

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Mary Spengler
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Joined: Dec 21, 2001
Posted: Apr 17, 2002 12:11 PM

*laughing to death*

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awhitefire
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Joined: Feb 19, 2002
Posted: Apr 20, 2002 8:58 AM

Chuckles... then suddenly Adam starts to roll on the floor laughing histerically. wink

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pkNRG
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Joined: Jul 15, 2001
Posted: May 10, 2002 8:51 AM

hey n...thats great that you brought the smileybusters up again...i thought the story were gone with the board back in the days..;D

this time ill save it on my harddrive...

hey, your tripod html page has some dead pics...you find them all here, if you want to fix them:
http://home.t-online.de/home/DanielBender/smileys/

but i guess ill do a mirror with them fixed...smile

keep on bustin, guys!

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thePizzaMaster
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Joined: Oct 23, 2001
Posted: May 13, 2002 10:52 PM

smile cool
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Bo Holbrook
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Joined: Jul 14, 2001
Posted: May 12, 2003 3:47 PM

BOOOOOOONGAH!

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Proton_User
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Posted: May 12, 2003 4:23 PM

this is a whole year since PKnrg posted on this topic cool!! what a funny story sounds strangly familiar!! smile

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GhostBustersIV
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Posted: May 13, 2003 11:34 PM

I love the gifs! The fic is cool!

Make sequel please!

Slimebusters 2 Coming to save the world once again.
lol

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