I came across 2 very unpolished comic pages I made and thought I would post them anyway just to give the idea the chance it never got:


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I think you are trying to make it “gritty” by giving them beards and making them frown constantly, which i dont like, but idk its just one page, you should keep writing and we'll see how it pans out.