“You see, being able to purchase the toys wouldn't be about ”adding them to a collection“…”
sounds like it to me

nothing wrong with that, though.
nicely done voice. i feel that every ghosthead that yearns to have the original REAL GHOSTBUSTERS toys are after the very same thing, regaining a peice of childhood that was once lost. the same thing happened to me, my mother gave away my figures, which weren't that many. also, like you, i'm going through a VERY tough sememster in college right now. not just academic wise, but i've also had to deal with the loss of a three year relationship, the divorce of my parents, and moved FAR away from home for the first time in my life. anyway, i'm not going to try to make this into an essay for the so-called “competition”, as easy as it may seem. GOOD LUCK guys! :d