Hey everyone. I just submitted my first fanfic ever for the site yesterday. Once it's up I would love for whatever feedback you can throw at me. I forgot to mention this when I submitted it, but I'd like to thank Zack, Kingpin and Egon 13 for helping with one part in particular for this story of which it might not have been as decent as it turned out if not for they're input, advice and suggestions for me. Thanks guys. I appreciated all the advice and suggestions you gave me on little parts here and there for this fanfic. I dedicate it to the three of you

Glad to have helped a fellow authour.

It's up, congrats! Click here to read it.

Glad to lend a hand even if I may not have known what I was talking about Everybody check it out! It's a really good story!

Zack

I just want to say thanks again to those who helped me out with little parts in it. It also makes me happy to see that it's gotten 10's and it's only been up half a day maybe less. It really means a lot to me to those who gave it 10's seeing as how this is the first fanfic I've ever submitted to the site. I'd also like to thank Chad for approving it for the site. I hope everyone enjoys it

self promotion works wonders.. By the way if anyone hasn't seen my site yet hehe Thanks to everybody for rating my site and all the positive feedback in general and back and Ectoman putting me in the news on their respective sites

Zack

It is very very good. I liked it much!!!