K, everybody, here's a little piece of the new part (this is the second story of the new generation)….tell me what you think:
“And this is the pool,” said the tall man. He wore a blue uniform with the words ‘Otec Hotel’ written on the shoulder. The Ghostbusters looked into the pool. It was dark, and cloudy. And it was sort or bubbling. Egon bent down and stuck his hand into the water. “It’s ice cold,” he observed. Thunder looked towards the other end of the pool, there were people swimming in it. “Look,” she said. The Ghostbusters were a bit shocked that Twister’s talking trait had carried on; they were also shocked that there were little children swimming at the other end. Also, the water down there and clear and blue. Winston looked at the man with the uniform. “How come you haven’t closed this pool down, man,” he growled. “We see no reason too,” the man snarled. “Look,” Peter pointed into the pool. The cloudy water was moving towards the kids. It started out slow then it speeded up. “What are we gonna do guys?” asked Ray, nervously. Thunder suddenly took off towards the other end. She sped ahead of the cloudy form and jumped in the water. “NOOOOO,” Peter cried. Thunder swam to the children just as the cloudy form swallowed them. It swirled around and waved about. The Ghostbusters ran down there. Peter took off his shirt and prepared to go in. “Don’t,” Egon stopped him. “We don’t know how dangerous this thing is.” The water formed a volcano shape and spat Thunder out. She flew through the air and landed by the benches. She got up and shook her head. “What a ride,” she said.