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by Mike_D

23 years, 10 months ago

I'm in the middle on this project about a trained ghostbuster that is carrying the gb franchise to Mackinaw Island (a small island in michigan). This is his first case and beginning of my new website, so please give me some feedback on the cartooning and story line!!

-mikeD

http://www.geocities.com/nomad202/cases.html

by ghostbusta27

23 years, 10 months ago

More detail, it's too jumpy from piece to piece. You wrote it like a “I did this, and then I did this, and Then i did this…etc.”

Ry

by Mike_D

23 years, 10 months ago

Yeah i know, right now its just an example page…its the same story line, but i threw it all together i about 5 minutes (exception of the pics). So its not the REAL thing, just an idea in the works and some thoughts on the idea…

by GBTaiMaiShu

23 years, 10 months ago

why mackinac? why not someplace else? heh

by Mike_D

23 years, 10 months ago

Hehe, ok, i need some good cities to have this guy work in…Mackinaw was just somethin to play around with (but if anybody has ever been there you'll know that theres just fudge and horse crap there…lol)

-mikeD

by GBTaiMaiShu

23 years, 10 months ago

Detroit, Henry Ford Museum/Greenfield Village, one of those myriad cemeteries out there, lots of places to work

by Specter

23 years, 10 months ago

Reah!