Sword of Ruth--Critique and commentary


by andophiroxia

22 years, 8 months ago

Hello!

I just put up a three-part installment story on the Real Ghostbusters Fanfic. It's called Sword of Ruth. Please read it, rate it, and tell me what you think!

So far, a lot of people that I have sent it to, have loved it. I warn you it has adult language and some situations, but it is not smut or anything like that. All language I felt, was entitled and applicable to the characters themselves. So please, let me know how I fleshed them out and what I could do better in. Also, I would love to answer any questions about format, characters, and stuff like that.


Thanks!

Andophiroxia

by PeterVenkmanFan

22 years, 8 months ago

I just wanted to say even though you already know this, that I loved all three parts and look forward to more if there is more. Very well written I think.

by andophiroxia

22 years, 8 months ago

Thanks, man smile

by NetSolo

22 years, 8 months ago

Oh man, me and my dyslexia… I saw Ruth and Cri– and immediately thought Ruth Chris… mmm steak… smile

by andophiroxia

22 years, 8 months ago

Whhhhaaaat!?!?!?!

by vgirl

22 years, 7 months ago

That's our Net.
I thought your stories were great as I told you before and they're intense. Just one thing, you might wanna do a little light editing to the story. But otherwise, good job.
Maybe I missed something but didn't you only just hint that more goes on than what you wrote? I think it's good enough for me, with the obvious exceptions.
BTW- Some of the gang and I've been joking about our ‘similar coincidence’ the gang from the site, that is. Well good luck on the next story you churn out, I'm sure it'll be interesting.

by Kingpin

22 years, 7 months ago

I liked them, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

by NxtGhostbuster

22 years, 7 months ago

I think you released your fourth part of your series, did you not?

by andophiroxia

22 years, 7 months ago

No not yet. I will, however release it when I have introduced some more of the characters in this play of sorts. smile However, be on the watch for more stories, they will include the same people!