Been working on this in my spare time. All alone for Thanksgiving today so I threw together the logo in Illustrator and finished shading Egon and Venkman. How's it looking so far? Critiques? Comments?
by mdp872105
16 years, 5 months ago
Looks great love the shading on venkman and egon
a couple of comments about it 1. logo needs to be a little wider 2. need to shade winston and ray 3. ray looks kind of old maybe reducing some of the lines might help
But I'm not an artist all I know is this is going to become my wallpaper soon
by Bativac
16 years, 5 months ago
Thanks for the response! Here is my rebuttal:
1) The logo is just kind of dropped on there – I'm going to throw the Real Ghostbusters cartoon logo on there, too. I'm working on that in Illustrator.
2) Winston and Ray will be shaded once I finish the piece.
3) Someone else mentioned that Ray looked a little old, so I removed the wrinkles (“crow's feet”) I had around his eyes. Maybe it's the two wrinkles on his forehead that are making him look older? I'll play with it and see what I can do.
If anyone sees any weird color choices, please tell me. I'm colorblind, so if anybody's hair is green, it wasn't intentional…
by Bativac
16 years, 5 months ago
I took one of the wrinkles off and added some hair, how does Ray look now?
by mdp872105
16 years, 5 months ago
I think its his mouth line thats making him look old it might need to be shorten a bit and maybe the line needs to be thinner.
by mdp872105
16 years, 5 months ago
woops posted at the same time ignore earlier post. :p but yes that looks better might need to make the line around his mouth thinner but that looks a lot better.