what do u think?


by stunty

22 years, 11 months ago


right just listen to this…..



a boy is dyin.his girlfriend does this spell to try and cure him but it goes wrong and all demons and ghosts and things start appearing.but worst of all
mecharez the most evil god of magic of all time has possesd the girl and his evil wife possesed the almost dead boy.the GHOSTBUSTERS are over run tryin to sort out all this stuff but they r over run so the city thinks they cant cope so everyone gets hysterical makin the GBS life even harder.


and thats as far as i got. what do u think so far? and i want honest opinions.



rock on my ghostbusting brothers……and sisters!

by Twister

22 years, 11 months ago


It sucks!!! No…just kidding..hehe…I like it..needs a bit more detail though

by Dr.Spengler

22 years, 10 months ago


If you lengthen it out with a strong and compelling story, you just might have a very good fanfic on your hands.

by Biggsexi

22 years, 10 months ago


I agree, it has the ability to be very interesting.

by Proton_Pack

22 years, 10 months ago


you got a good plot going now expand!

by ghostbuster520

22 years, 10 months ago


Expand on the idea!

by stunty

22 years, 9 months ago


hmm ok,expandin.u mean like put fine details to it?i can do that.

k.

they start sortin things out but then in a dusty corner of his shop ray finds a old book of prophecies.it says that the world will end when mecharez marries twice. now this get out to the public just as mecharez finds his second(was it a him i cant remember well if it was a her just change things round)wife to be and the public know this and start doin the whole run around screamin thing.the gbs go to the church with a plan but the public just keep pushin them round then the mayor calls for them and starts beggin them to do somethin so they lose their temper with him.he gets annoyed and throws them out but not before the public think theyve been locked up.the public lose all hope,get more hysterical so their job is even harder.
they get to the church just as the priest-slimer-says
“does anyone no why these cant b married?” the gbs say“coz itll end the world”
mecharez gets all mad and him and his wife and nearly wife start fightin the ghostbusters one by one the gbs get knocked unconcious except egon.who comes up with a cunnin plan to stop mecharez.he remembers a general undoin spell and says that.
theres an explosion and everything that happens unhappens and no one except the gbs remember it. the girl and boy vanish never to be seen again but it doesnt matter coz no one can remember them any way!

the gbs save an otherwise disASterous day!

ta-da!